Making the game more newbie friendly.

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Dakan
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Re: Making the game more newbie friendly.

Post by Dakan »

The Courtyard
The outer wall of the manor lines the courtyard to the south and west,
stretching its gray blocks above the white of the flagstone floor. The yard
continues to the north and east, where the manor proper lies. A few vines
have managed to climb over the wall from the outside, and are slowly making
their way down toward the ground.
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Captain Lem, wielding a broadsword is standing here.
With a sullen look on his face a young man goes about his duties.


Atop a Tower
The tower is open to the sky, with a tall, wide wall running about the circle.
A gap in the floor leads down a staircase to the interior of the manor. A
mosaic has been set into the floor, depicting a complicated geometric pattern.
A small map hangs on the wall here.
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A hasty scribe, wielding a small axe is standing here.



Any point to these guys?
Dakan
Posts: 35
Joined: Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:05 am

Re: Making the game more newbie friendly.

Post by Dakan »

09:30] 28/28 43/49 > look sign
A maid leaves down.

ANNOUNCEMENT

The High Lord has a quest for any adventurous persons that are willing!
If you are interested, enter the throneroom and talk to the High Lord.

[In the throne room type, 'ask lord about quest']

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The Throneroom
A large throne like chair, stands on a dais on the north wall of the room. A
crystal chandelier dangles from the ceiling, filling the room with its
flickering light. The walls swoop up to the ceiling, which arches high
overhead. The walls are covered with wood panels, each framed by black marble.
Double doors stand open to the south.
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High Lord Sumar is sitting here on a throne-like chair.

[09:30] 28/28 43/49 >
[ Tip: If a gate is closed, try 'call' to have the gatekeepers open it. ]

[09:30] 28/28 44/49 > 'quest
You say, 'quest'

[09:30] 28/28 44/49 > look high lord
High Lord Sumar is a stocky man with rounded features. He sits on his
throne-like chair with authority and the fire in his eyes suggests action
waiting to happen.

High Lord Sumar is in excellent condition.

High Lord Sumar is using:
around head an emerald encrusted golden circlet
around neck a short chain of thick gold
left finger a wide golden band set with a large onyx
on legs a pair of baggy blue and cream breeches
on feet a pair of gold-worked boots
on body a blue brocade coat

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The Throneroom
A large throne like chair, stands on a dais on the north wall of the room. A
crystal chandelier dangles from the ceiling, filling the room with its
flickering light. The walls swoop up to the ceiling, which arches high
overhead. The walls are covered with wood panels, each framed by black marble.
Double doors stand open to the south.
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High Lord Sumar is sitting here on a throne-like chair.

[09:30] 28/28 48/49 > 'ask lord about quest
You say, 'ask lord about quest'

[09:30] 28/28 49/49 > ask lord about quest

[09:31] 28/28 49/49 >
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High Lord Sumar says, 'Ahh! So you are here for the quest? Good!'

[09:31] 28/28 49/49 >
High Lord Sumar says, 'Let me tell you about it....'

[09:31] 28/28 49/49 >
High Lord Sumar says, 'A golden crown was passed down through my family,'

[09:31] 28/28 49/49 >
High Lord Sumar says, 'from long ago when we had Kings and Queens in our Nation.'

[09:31] 28/28 49/49 >
High Lord Sumar says, 'My ancestors thought it might one day be stolen so they'

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High Lord Sumar says, 'kept it in a hidden storeroom.'

[09:31] 28/28 49/49 >
High Lord Sumar says, 'Over the years, the storeroom's location was forgotten,'

[09:31] 28/28 49/49 >
High Lord Sumar says, 'and our precious heirloom has been lost.'

[09:31] 28/28 49/49 >
High Lord Sumar says, 'If you can find that storeroom and return the crown '

[09:31] 28/28 49/49 >
High Lord Sumar says, 'to me, you will be handsomely rewarded!'

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[ Tip: To see your surrounding area type map. ]

[09:31] 28/28 49/49 >
High Lord Sumar sits back on the thronelike chair and settles into deep thought.







When most tasks / quests are done by say blah blah task blah blah quest, having the first -quest- they get shouldn't be done by syntax. He should respond to 'say quest' or something else.
Dakan
Posts: 35
Joined: Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:05 am

Re: Making the game more newbie friendly.

Post by Dakan »

The mini town bank could use some work.

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The Bank
The lobby of the bank separated from the inside by a thick wall. A window on
that wall looks into the main part of the bank and is guarded with iron bars.
Cold, hard rock makes up the floor, walls, and ceilings, giving it a very
impersonal look. A door to the south leads out to the main street.
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A money exchanger, wielding a pearl-hilted stiletto is standing here.



Add to the description or make him say, 'You can -deposit- your money, check your -balance- or -withdraw- money!'
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